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Post by Beejay1231 on Fri Dec 11 2009, 16:15

Here is the first poetry contest at this forum. The details are as follows:

Contestants: ~0Range-1SL0ve~

Contest Winner: ~0Range-1SL0ve~

Judges: Beejayadmin, cuteako27

Theme: Love

Requirements: 2 - 4 stanzas with 4 lines per stanza; only 1 poetry entry

Criteria for judging
- Originality / Uniqueness: 20 pts.
- Grammar: 20 pts.
- Use of words: 20 pts.
- Theme: 30 pts.
- Lessons / Values: 10 pts

Deadline: December 19, 2009 (Saturday)

Prizes:
1st place - 150 points + Certified Poet rank
2nd place - 100 points
3rd place - 50 points

*If you want to be a judge or a contestant, please say so by posting in this forum.


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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by cuteako27 on Fri Dec 11 2009, 16:29

judgeee plss Smile tnx. haha. btw did anyone join the first contest?
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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by Beejay1231 on Fri Dec 11 2009, 16:42

cuteako27 wrote:judgeee plss Smile tnx. haha. btw did anyone join the first contest?

Alright, added. No one joined the first contest, sadly. And, as judge, there should be no biases in judging the contestants' work, alright? Very Happy

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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by cuteako27 on Fri Dec 11 2009, 16:50

yeaa..dnt wrry. i wont be biased. i sweearr Smile ahaha


I, Jienalynne Khae T. Garillo, will promise to not be biased in being a judge in Bera's Poetry Contest 1. So help me God.
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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by ~0Range-1SL0ve~ on Sat Dec 12 2009, 14:16

Bera, if how ever I entered my poem (What is this life for) is it ok? confused confused
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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by Beejay1231 on Sat Dec 12 2009, 14:26

~0Range-1SL0ve~ wrote:Bera, if how ever I entered my poem (What is this life for) is it ok? confused confused
Merry Christmas! santa rendeer

You can enter any poem as long as it fits to the theme which is love. And, you can only enter one entry. I guess I'll be adding you to the contestants list. Good luck! Very Happy

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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by ~0Range-1SL0ve~ on Sat Dec 12 2009, 14:30

Ahh...So the theme is about love..Okay..I want to join pirat (Thanks Beejay)
Wish me luck guys! affraid affraid
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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by ~0Range-1SL0ve~ on Fri Dec 18 2009, 19:25

*This is my entry for the contest Very Happy hope you like it.

LOVE - by ~0Range-1SL0ve~
I never really knew you,
you were just another friend.
But when I got to know you,
I let my heart unbend.

I couldn't help past memories that would only make me cry,
I had to forget my first love and give love another try.
So I've fallen in love with you, and I'll never let you go,
I love you more than anyone, I just had to let you know.

And if you ever wonder why, I don't know what I'll say.
But I'll never stop loving you each and every day.
My feelings for you will never change, just know my feelings are true.
Just remember one thing..........I Love You!!!!!
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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by Beejay1231 on Sat Dec 19 2009, 00:15

Here's my verdict:
Originality / Uniqueness: 15 pts.
Grammar: 20 pts.
Use of words: 15 pts.
Theme: 30 pts.
Lessons / Values: 8 pts.

Total: 88 pts.

Critique:

An impressive job with the poem. However, I just want to point out some things. Your lines are way too long. You should only put little words that are tricky and not easy to understand like what poem writers do. I've actually read poems similar to this which is the reason why I gave you 15 pts. for uniqueness. And, there are some cheesy lines too.

But, it's right on spot with the theme, a reason why I gave you a perfect 30 for that. Grammar seems fine but the use of words kind of disturbed me but not really. As I said, the long length of lines. For values, I gave you 8 pts. Your poem has its lessons but not really spotted on.

Overall, a good and impressive job wit hthe poem! If no one enters and submits their work by tomorrow, you'll win by default. Very Happy I hope to see you in the next poetry contest! And maybe, you can also enter the Holiday Contest. santa

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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by ~0Range-1SL0ve~ on Sat Dec 19 2009, 00:21

Thanks BeeJay! Actually I was in a hurry in making that poem that's why it's a little rough. Anyways I'm looking forward to tomorrow. Very Happy Rock! Rock on! .
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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by Beejay1231 on Sat Dec 19 2009, 00:24

~0Range-1SL0ve~ wrote:Thanks BeeJay! Actually I was in a hurry in making that poem that's why it's a little rough. Anyways I'm looking forward to tomorrow. Very Happy Rock! Rock on! .

Haha. I also thought that you wrote it in a hurry because I also make my stories kinda rough when I'm not in the writing mood or when I'm in a hurry to post it. Very Happy

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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by Beejay1231 on Sat Dec 19 2009, 16:49

We now have a winner for this contest: ~0Range-1SL0ve~

Congratulations! We hope to see your work in another contest!

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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by cuteako27 on Sat Dec 19 2009, 20:18

haha. LOL. nice. a win by default eh Smile haha. anyways gratz insan Razz
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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by cuteako27 on Sat Dec 19 2009, 20:20

btw. i ddnt get to judge insan! haha Razz srry bout that. such a fail judge. ddnt see ur poem e. just saw bera's announcement that u won already Smile haha. mybee nxt time.. hope to see u in poetry contest 2. i wish for more contestants Razz haha.
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Re: Bera's Poetry Contest 1

Post by Beejay1231 on Sat Dec 19 2009, 21:04

Since this contest is over, thread closed. To join the next contest, just post in the Bera's Poetry contest 2 thread.

Thread ==> closed

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