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Post by Beejay1231 Sat Jul 10 2010, 23:48

I haven't written out the whole plot yet but these are some parts:

Genre: Science fiction, action, thriller, mystery

Main character:

Genesis
- A human who died because of an incident called "Human Eradication". His lifeless body is found by a group of scientists called the "Viridium". Thanks to the power of the Viridium technology, his life was born anew into the body of an artificial human with no memory of who he was. But one day, everything goes berserk and so starts his life as a heartless being with no purpose in life..............
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Post by rhasta3000 Sun Jul 11 2010, 00:33

Nice! You used my trademark here. Enter the world of the Viridiums, where light and darkness coexist!
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Post by Beejay1231 Sun Jul 11 2010, 00:39

rhasta3000 wrote:Nice! You used my trademark here. Enter the world of the Viridiums, where light and darkness coexist!

Exactly! And it will have an element of something familiar to mankind. Very Happy
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Post by dianediane78 Mon Jul 19 2010, 23:55

Are you done writing a chapter of this?
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Post by Beejay1231 Tue Jul 20 2010, 01:42

dianediane78 wrote:Are you done writing a chapter of this?

Unfortunately, not yet. But I already have its plot overview. I might post the 1st chapter in the weekend. Very Happy
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Post by Beejay1231 Thu Aug 19 2010, 22:54

More info about the story:

The world of Genesis Retribution is set on the age of Pre-Earth where mankind has developed an unbelievably advanced technology that can even tamper with human lives.

Genesis, who was killed in the Human Eradication, was the first human specimen used by the Viridium in launching the Illumina, the Great Seal to opening the secrets of the world.

But, the experiment failed and so begins Genesis's new life, a new life to start a new era and a new life to wither. The Viridium's hunt for the Illumina begins!

So there's a little info. Hopefully, I'll be able to write the first chapter soon. Very Happy
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