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Post by Beejay1231 on Mon Dec 07 2009, 21:40

Blader Zeo

Chapter 1: Arrival of the Flame Blader

There exists seven magical orbs with each one bearing their own element that are said to maintain time-space energy balanced. Each of the magical orbs are said to be protected by the seven chosen Bladers. Time-space energy is an unusual and complex form of energy which needs to be balanced in order to prevent the merging of the past and future times. The merging of the two different times is called a Time Paradox. The past is separated from the future through a boundary which is represented by a light green arrow-like figure deep in outer space. However, that very same boundary is now damaged.

"I see. So gaining these orbs has its benefits after all." said a man shrouded in a black robe. His voice sounded like the voice of an easygoing person. Around his neck is an indigo orb bearing the symbol of Sigma. Behind him is a city burning down in flames. Darkness, fire, lightning, and destruction, those were the things that were present in that very place. As he extended his arm in front of him, his orb glowed in a bright indigo color. Along with the powers of the other elemental orbs of the Bladers that he now possess, he was able to create a dark portal. Bolts of lightning came swooping down as another person appeared, coming from one of those bolts. He quickly recognized him as his ally. "Lightnight?"

"Yes. It is me, master." Lightnight replied, his voice sounding like a kid. He has a messy blond hair and suspicious star-like eyes. He wears a white magician's outfit and a pointed magician's hat with the same color. At that time, he was riding a broomstick. Around his neck is a green orb bearing the symbol of Gamma. His orb also glowed but in a bright light green color, as if it was reacting with the robed man's Sigma orb.

"Let's go, Lightnight. He is waiting for us." the robed man spoke once again. Along with his comrade Lightnight, he entered the portal. When they arrived inside, they saw a black boundless space filled with bright and shining stars. Somewhere in that boundless space is a white portal which will lead them to their destination. "Flame Blader.......I shall meet you soon." he said as he cracked a mischievous smile. They have crossed the boundary that separates the past from the future. What could be awaiting them in the past? The robed man, the darkness amidst the shining light.

"I will change the future." a serious female voice said. Unkown to them, someone else followed them in their trip to the past and that someone is a woman. She wears a dark violet kunoichi outfit, has her rosy hair in a pineapple-inspired hair style with the extended strand hanging, and has golden amber eyes. One look at her and you would feel the intimidating aura, immense energy, and brimming determination imbued in her very soul. Who is this woman who walks through time?

At the present time, four robed men had gathered in a small dark warehouse where the only sources of light are flames emitted by candles. Each of the four men were standing at each corner of the small warehouse. At the middle was an orange orb of about the size of Lightnight's orb. They were talking about the flame orb and Demon Hunter Zeo. Zeo is said to be one of the top bounty hunters in the world. It is said that no person has survived fighting him. He is characterized for having a black spiky hair with two spiky strands on the edges of his face. He has cold black eyes, wears an unbuttoned black coat, and pants with the same color. He is also known to wield a blade that chooses its own master, Black Blade.

"Flame Blader? Are you saying Demon Hunter Zeo is one of the chosen bladers, just like us?" asked one of the robed men. Zeo earned the title 'Demon Hunter Zeo' due to the number of outlaws and criminals that he had defeated. Although ruthless and cold to outlaws, he actually has a soft spot for normal citizens and would even go as far as to bet his own life just for their safety. Due to this, he is honored and feared at the same time. In combat, he attacks so swiftly that his opponents doesn't even notice him attacking. These days, he is said to be found in a desert near the city in the middle of the desert, Oasis.

"I'll be going after him." said another of the four bladers. "I want to see for myself how strong the chosen flame blader really is." without further ado, he left the warehouse and headed straight to his destination. Before continuing his journey, he removed his robe. He is characterized for having a short strandy light blue hair with the eyes of a carefree but hot-tempered person. He who bears the Aqua orb, he who dashes through and continues to attack like fierce droplets of rain, the man who wields the Rain Blade, Rain.

Meanwhile, at the desert where Zeo is, he is currently facing a bald outlaw. With him outmatching the outlaw's strength, he was easily knocked down to the ground. But, he gave him one chance. If the outlaw will tell him the location of Hawk, he will set him free and even spare his life. Hawk is the strongest criminal in the whole world and is also the one who has the highest bounty. He is the main reason why Zeo became a bounty hunter in the first place. In order to avenge the people precious to him and defeat Hawk, Zeo became who is now known as Demon Hunter Zeo.

"I'll give you one last chance. Tell me. Where is Hawk?" said Zeo, his voice rising in every word he said. The bald outlaw didn't even respond. He was shivering, frightened, and intimidated. There was nothing he could do. Pitying him, Zeo turned away from him. The outlaw thought Zeo was just going to set him free and so he attacked with his sword. Fortunately, Zeo was able to counter and guard himself using his sword. The outlaw's sword turned to nothing but shattered pieces. After a while, his sword changed in form. It turned into dark flames. The signature move everybody fears, Moonlight Darkness. "Black Blade: Moonlight Darkness!" with that last slash, the outlaw was finally knocked out.

"In order to avenge the people precious to me, I will defeat you, Hawk!" cried Zeo out loud. It was then that he heard the sound of claps. Little by little, the sound became clearer and louder. He looked above, only to see droplets of rain falling in the speed of light. As he observed closely, what he thought were droplets were actually blades imbued with aqua energy. The blades continued to chase his every move until he was hit by all of them. From above appeared Rain who was responsible for firing those blades. One by one, the blades went back to his eight daggers.

"Not bad." commented Rain, complementing Zeo's move.

"Black Blade: Moonlight Shadow." said Zeo as the Zeo figure who was hit by the blades faded. It turned out he used his ability to create an illusion in the shadows to make his opponent think that he was hit. The real one came from above and slashed Rain but he was able to dodge the assault. Their blades clashed with each other. Once again, the Aqua Blader fired the blades of his Rain Blade towards Zeo, causing the demon hunter to be pushed away. He then took out the Aqua orb and imbued its great strength to his eight daggers that he holds in between his fingers.

"Your first test.......I shall give you, flame Blader. Rain Blade: Assault Form." said Rain. Gradually, the eight daggers connected and formed a wheel-shaped sword with blades in each of the eight directions. The blade that is said to give tranquility and silence, Wheel of the Eight Rain Blades.


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Zeo: A person named Rain appears and claims that I am one of the Bladers, the Flame Blader. He mentions that he is here to test my abilities. One of the legendary blades like the Black Blade, the Rain Blade overwhelms me with its ferocious power in the form of the Wheel of the Eight Rain Blades.

Rain: I want to see if you are the proper choice, Demon Hunter Zeo. Next time on Blader Zeo, Black Blade: Moonlight Flame. The rain, can you feel its feeling?

Zeo: I don't want to use this but it seems I have no choice. I guess it's time to get serious. Overwhelm the blade with your terrifying flame, Black Blade: Moonlight Flame!

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Post by cuteako27 on Wed Dec 09 2009, 00:05

ohh..u posted ur blader zeo here Smile
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Post by cuteako27 on Fri Dec 11 2009, 17:21

wow bera! i read Blader Zeo ! atlast! haha. its soo good SmileWink i can totally imagine what's happening. haha. mybe its just because i have a strong imagination. anyways. im getting a pretty good handsome image of Zeo. haha Smile Wink haha. ill be waiting for chap 2 Wink finish writing chap 2! i want moree. haha.
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Post by Beejay1231 on Fri Dec 18 2009, 13:34

cuteako27 wrote:wow bera! i read Blader Zeo ! atlast! haha. its soo good SmileWink i can totally imagine what's happening. haha. mybe its just because i have a strong imagination. anyways. im getting a pretty good handsome image of Zeo. haha Smile Wink haha. ill be waiting for chap 2 Wink finish writing chap 2! i want moree. haha.

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Post by ~0Range-1SL0ve~ on Fri Dec 18 2009, 15:14

Nice BeeJay...You know, if I have a spare time, I can make your "Blader Zeo" into a manga Rock! . I mean, from a written text to comics or anime. It's just a proposal lol!. Well I don't know you decide if you want it to become a manga. Rock on! Rock!
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~0Range-1SL0ve~ wrote:Nice BeeJay...You know, if I have a spare time, I can make your "Blader Zeo" into a manga Rock! . I mean, from a written text to comics or anime. It's just a proposal lol!. Well I don't know you decide if you want it to become a manga. Rock on! Rock!

That would be totally cool!! Very Happy And, it would even help readers visualize more. Thanks! Rock on! Rock on! Rock!

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Post by lychee:3 on Fri Dec 18 2009, 16:17

Waa~ Bera!

Nice! Great work!
Nice job! All the good things come to you!

Zeo is my hero!
Kishishishi Smile)

Go Bera!

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Post by Beejay1231 on Fri Dec 18 2009, 16:21

lychee:3 wrote:Waa~ Bera!

Nice! Great work!
Nice job! All the good things come to you!

Zeo is my hero!
Kishishishi Smile)

Go Bera!

Thanks for the comment! Chapter 2 will be up soon! Very Happy I'm almost done with it. Very Happy

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Blader Zeo

Chapter 2: Black Blade: Moonlight Flame

"The Wheel of the Eight Rain Blades? Heheheheeh....." a young boy snickered. He was observing the two bladers' battle at a terrain on the desert. He has dark blue hair with strands of his hair extending to the left side of his face, covering his entire left eye. He was wearing a cowboy hat covering his face and his body was shrouded in a black robe. Lying down on the sand, he turned his vision from the battle to a nearby city. The city was none other than the city hidden in the middle of the desert, Oasis. "The wind......I feel it. It's drawing near." the boy whistled. Strangely, a strong wind came gushing. Both Zeo and Rain were surprised while the boy just made a mischievous smile.

"Wind?" thought Rain, taken aback. He felt that the wind was familiar. It was as if he already encountered it before. It was the same wind used by the Wind Blader. Of all the chosen bladers, he is said to be the third in fighting power. He is even stronger than Rain. What's surprising is that he's also the youngest of the bladers. "It can't be....is this his doing?" the Aqua blader's eyes widened upon witnessing the strong force of the wind. Without his knowledge, Zeo charged towards him. He was about to get striked by the Black Blade but fortunately, he defended himself with his own blade.

"Black Blade: Moonlight Darkness!" cried Zeo as the blade of his sword turned to dark flames again. But, something shocked him. "What?! My flames.....they died out." due to the strong force of the wind, his flames vanished. An idea sparked Rain. This field might serve as his advantage after all. He just need to guide his ballistic blades to the current of the wind and they would definitely hit Zeo. On the other hand, Zeo would not have power as strong as his signature move without his flames. Rain spun the wheel blade, unleashing icicles towards Zeo. The flame blader managed to avoid some of the icicles but he was also hit, tearing some parts of his outfit.

"Are you really worthy to be called the Flame Blader?" asked Rain, mocking Zeo. "To be the flame that envelops all in any circumstance......that is the Flame Blader's duty." he spun his blade again and hit Zeo with icicles for the second time around, causing the Flame Blader to be downed. Zeo didn't even utter a word after getting hit by Rain's icicles directly. Surprisingly, the Zeo figure who was hit by the icicles faded in dark flames. It turned out that he used his technique, Black Blade: Moonlight Shadow. However, Rain still felt his presence. Specifically, Zeo was behind him. "I can see through you." Zeo charged and Rain countered by firing icicles but like before, the figure faded in dark flames. "Another one of your illusions?"

"Heh. Those illusions bought me enough time." said Zeo calmly. Rain was astounded upon seeing the Flame Blader. He couldn't believe his eyes. This was the first time he saw such a powerful force. He witnessed the surge of powerful orange flames. The flames surrounded Zeo's sword, acting like an aura. This time around, the flames were not being blown away by the strong force of the wind. Instead, it grew even larger because of it. "Black Blade.......Moonlight Flame!!" he cried as he charged towards Rain. The Aqua Blader defended himself by using his sword from Zeo's attack. However, it was sent away because of the strength of Zeo's technique.

"A flame that envelops all in any circumstance......" he uttered as he striked Rain with his sword, causing the Aqua Blader to be blown away and fall to the ground. He went to the location where Rain crashed and saw him in tatters. Some parts of his outfit were torn. Despite his situation, Rain still cracked a smile. Zeo noticed something odd. He then turned his vision from the downed Aqua Blader to his left arm, the arm where he was holding his sword with his hand. He noticed that it was gradually being crystallized. "My arm......the Black Blade and its flames....." his left arm was completely crystallized. "But when did you.....?"

"I can see through you, Flame Blader." said Rain, his voice weak. "It was during that time." a piece of memory flashed through Rain's mind as he told Zeo the details. Before he was sent away by the Moonlight Flame attack, he swiftly unleashed aqua energy which had taken the form of ice. Without his opponent's knowledge, he attached the energy on Zeo's hand. Gradually, the energy grew, causing the crystallization of the Flame Blader's arm. The piece of memory faded. "Ice Seed." both Zeo and Rain were surprised by the sudden strong force of the wind. It was even stronger than before.

"The wind. Is he coming? To be the wind that speaks in silence, the duty of the Wind Blader." Rain spoke again. It was not just the wind that surprised them. The once starry skies of the desert turned dark. Lightning bolts came crashing down. But, they weren't normal blue lightning bolts. They were in green color. This sensation is the same as before. Rain couldn't believe that he is now witnessing the unbelievable strength of two of the strongest three bladers, Lightning and Wind. An explosion occured from a nearby city, Oasis which alarmed the two bladers. "The city......we need to check what's happening." without further ado, Rain headed towards the city being bombarded by explosions.

"I need to find a way to melt this ice." said Zeo as he settled on the ground. While sitting, he noticed a young girl of about 11 years old heading towards the city of Oasis. The girl was wearing a long-sleeved red shirt with golden markings and a short-sleeved light green jacket over it. She was also wearing a light green mini skirt. She has a long light green hair with two shoulder-length bangs beside her face. Her eyes are gray-gold in color.

"My flame is not easily extinguished." he said as the ice gradually melted. It turned out that his orange flames were not extinguished and crystallized by the attack. Thanks to this, Zeo could feel his left arm again. Recovering his left arm, he quickly followed Rain, heading towards the city of Oasis. When he got there, he didn't see any people. It was as if it was a ghost town. Some of the flat-roofed buildings were reduced to nothing but rubble. There was no sign of anyone until Zeo saw a lady in distress. The lady was being threatened by a mysterious robed person who was wearing a mask. However, the mask was not just something ordinary. The mask in appearance was a flickering flame.

"Get off." Zeo commanded the mysterious person seriously as he charged towards him. He slashed him with his blazing Black Blade, causing the mysterious person to be knocked out. After defeating the mysterious person, he reached for the lady's hand. The lady looked at him with innocent-looking amber eyes. She was shrouded in a light brown robe and has her short and fallout wavy hair in a rosy color. "Are you alright?"

"Yes." upon holding Zeo's hand, the young lady blushed. Their meeting was disturbed by another mysterious person bearing a blazing mask. "Another one?" the second mysterious person removed his hood and unequipped his flame mask, revealing his face. He is characterized for having a long crimson-colored hair in a hedgehog spine-inspired hair style with black streaks on it. He has carefree and at the same time, cold black eyes. He unleashed his sword, revealing its appearance to Zeo and the young lady. The sword that has the mighty power of lava and magma, Espada de Vulcan. In appearance, the sword is huge, has a black handle and a blade glowing similar to that of magma and lava.

"It's been a while, Zeo." said the mysterious person as he pointed his sword to the Flame Blader. Him mentioning Zeo's name struck the young lady. She had already heard the name before. She always hears that name in her kingdom. She couldn't believe that the same legendary bounty hunter, Demon Hunter Zeo, was the one who saved her from distress.

"Demon Hunter Zeo......." uttered the lady with the rosy hair.

"I see that you still have that weak Black Blade of yours." the mysterious person spoke once again. Like what Zeo did when preparing to unleash Black Blade: Moonlight Flame, he injected flame energy to his sword. However, his charge was faster than Zeo's. His flame was also different from the Flame Blader. The whole sword turned hot with drips of lava dropping to the ground. A frightening move, what is this monstrosity? "Espada de Vulcan: Volcanic Flame! Zeo, hand her over." Zeo raised his own weapon, a sign of disagreement. "Hmph. Trying to fight back, little brother? Let me see......if you're as good as they say."

A flame that can melt anything, the Volcanic Flame. Can Zeo defeat a flame stronger than his own and just who is this mysterious person who calls Zeo little brother?


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Zeo: A flame even stronger than my own........I'm pushed back to a corner in this fight. Protecting the mysterious lady, I get hit by every strong blow by my enemy. Just when hope seemed lost, the Aqua Blader arrives and helps me in the battle.

Rain: Why do you have the same power as the Wind Blader? What's your connection to him? Next time on Blader Zeo, Four Winds!

???: You are still naive and weak, little brother. I'll show you fear, suffering, and death.


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Post by ~0Range-1SL0ve~ on Sat Dec 19 2009, 02:15

BeeJay what are the 7 elements that you included at the story?
I only found 4....Water, Flame, Wind, and Lightning
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~0Range-1SL0ve~ wrote:BeeJay what are the 7 elements that you included at the story?
I only found 4....Water, Flame, Wind, and Lightning

Not all have appeared yet. The seven elements that I will be using are Water, Flame, Wind, Lightning, Earth, Darkness, and Light. I also plan to have each element represent their element through the colors of the rainbow. Zeo has the orange color: flame. Very Happy

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Post by ~0Range-1SL0ve~ on Sat Dec 19 2009, 02:26

I'm making the "Blader Zeo - chapter 1" page 1 right now. Very Happy . I like both chapters especially number 2 (it has more action). I'll be simplifying some words to make it like a real anime Wink . Thanks for the elements. Rock! Rock on!
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~0Range-1SL0ve~ wrote:I'm making the "Blader Zeo - chapter 1" page 1 right now. Very Happy . I like both chapters especially number 2 (it has more action). I'll be simplifying some words to make it like a real anime Wink . Thanks for the elements. Rock! Rock on!

No problem! Hahaha....I want to see your visualizations / manga version of the story. Very Happy Hope to see more action in chapter 3. If I my laziness won't strike, I'll make it tomorrow or during Sunday. Very Happy

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wow bera! its totally greaat! Razz haha. i can actually picture out whats happening. i bet that mysterious guy is handsome too Smile haha ohh well Razz haha. i like ur descriptions of the guys in BLADER ZEO aa Smile they look handsome. haha Razz ohh well.. good job beraa:) waiting for chap 3. post it! Smile) haha hurry nd make chap 3 already.. Razz GL..
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cuteako27 wrote:wow bera! its totally greaat! Razz haha. i can actually picture out whats happening. i bet that mysterious guy is handsome too Smile haha ohh well Razz haha. i like ur descriptions of the guys in BLADER ZEO aa Smile they look handsome. haha Razz ohh well.. good job beraa:) waiting for chap 3. post it! Smile) haha hurry nd make chap 3 already.. Razz GL..

Thanks! I'll probably make it today or tomorrow. By the way, I've edited something in the story. It's about the young lady Zeo met. She's supposed to have short and fallout hair in a rosy color. I forgot that description. Very Happy


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Post by Beejay1231 on Sat Dec 19 2009, 21:35

Here are the previews or rather titles for the upcoming chapters:

Arc 1: Four Winds Arc

Chapter 3: Four Winds
Chapter 4: The Two Flame Bladers
Chapter 5: Sorrowful Memories
Chapter 6: Resolve
Chapter 7: Spica of the Blue Star
Chapter 8: Star Bladers
Chapter 9: The Flame Orb
Chapter 10: Wind Blader

Edit: I changed something in the preview of chapter 3. Specifically, the title and some of the lines. The title has been changed to four winds.


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Blader Zeo

Chapter 3: Four Winds

Arriving at the city of Oasis, Rain witnessed the same thing Zeo did. There was not even a single person to be found. All the flat-roofed buildings were severely damaged. It seemed the city was just a shell of its former state. As he continued to walk, his body felt weaker. It was because of the damage the Flame Blader inflicted to him. He was panting and breathing heavily in every step he made. What more surprised him is the sudden surge of wind. It did not only push him back but also sent the wheel blade he was holding away from him. The sensation he felt was the same as before during his battle with Zeo. He felt that same murderous intent imbued in the force of the wind.

"This murderous intent......." muttered Rain. The feelings of weakness and exhaustion were present in his voice. The wind continued to push him away until it changed in form. The form of the wind turned crescent, similar to the sharp edges of blades. He dodged the crescent blasts which have taken the form of the wind one by one. Unfortunately, he was hit by the last blast. He was utterly blown away with a direction heading to one of the flat-roofed buildings. Due to the impact when he hit the building, it was destroyed, leaving him covered by the debris. From the gushing wind appeared a young boy. He has dark blue hair with some strands extending to the left side of his face, covering his entire left eye.

"Wind Blade....." said the boy, his voice in a serious tone. Aside from having dark blue hair, he was wearing a black cowboy hat. His whole body was shrouded in a black robe. He was the same boy who observed the battle of the two bladers. He unleashed wind energy and from that very energy appeared a pair of tonfas with sharp edges. He slashed thin air, sending out crescent blasts which were wind in form towards Rain who was covered by the debris. Due to the impact of the attack, the stones turned to little pebbles. The boy was expecting to see the Aqua Blader but what he saw surprised him. Rain was not there anymore. He smiled when he felt the presence of two persons beside him. "Pollux......I figured it's you."

"Zephyr, what are you doing at a place like this?" asked Pollux as Zephyr turned to face her. She was about 11 years old and was wearing a long-sleeved red shirt with golden markings and a short-sleeved light green jacket over it. She was also wearing a light green mini skirt. She has a long light green hair with two shoulder-length bangs beside her face. Her eyes are gray-gold in color. She was the very same girl that Zeo saw heading towards Oasis. Rain on the other hand managed to keep himself standing up even though he was in a weak state. "It can't be! The four winds......"

"Pollux, do you know what completes the chain of the four winds?" asked Zephyr with a mischievous smile present on his face. Pollux' eyes widened, taken aback from what the mysterious young boy said. Shaking due to nervousness, Pollux tried to utter a word but was cut off by Zephyr. His evil smile grew larger. One look at his face and you would know his desire for power. "The orb that completes the chain, Viento. It is said that Viento lies in a certain city that lies in the middle of the desert."

"Viento......." uttered Rain as he visualized the four wind orbs along with it. Aside from the wind orb which is said to be in the possession of the Wind Blader, there exists five more wind orbs. East Wind, South Wind, North Wind, and West Wind, these four wind orbs are connected to each other through a linking energy. When gathered with the Viento, the mysterious orb awakens and releases the dormant power of the four wind orbs. "Silencio, Tormenta, Ventisca, and Brisa......the awakened forms of the four wind orbs. Why? Why do you have the same power as the Wind Blader? What's your connection to him?" Rain's voice rose through every question he asked.

"Wind Blader?" asked Zephyr, somewhat mocking Rain. He glanced above at the sky only to see the soft gush of the cold wind as he let out a chuckle. Taking an orb from his pocket, he turned his vision back to Rain and Pollux. The orb he took from his pocket is the Wind Orb. Rain was surprised to see it. He saw that the orb contains an image of the wind with mixed red and silverish white color. "The Wind Blader? I am the Wind Blader! Here!" Zephyr threw the orb towards Rain. Fortunately, the Aqua Blader was able to get hold of it. Mysteriously, it reacted with Rain's orb. Both orbs glowed in their bright respective color. Silverish white and red for the Wind Orb while light blue for the Aqua Orb.

"Do you remember the first choice for the position of Flame Blader? He's here......to meet his little brother." the mysterious young boy spoke once again. Rain was struck and taken aback by his question. His eyes widened upon hearing that. The first choice is said to have the 10th strongest blade in the whole world. With his strength and destructive weapon, he contains a destructive power that can annihilate anyone. It is also said that no one has survived after battling him. "You can have that orb. I don't need it and I don't want to be one of the seven bladers." after he said that, he mysteriously vanished in thin air.

"I need to go to where the Flame Blader is. The difference in their fighting power is too great. He won't stand a chance against him." uttered Rain weakly. The orbs stopped glowing. He inserted the orbs in his pocket as he took the wheel blade from the ground. Pollux reached for his hand. A smile representing happiness was present on her face.

"I'll help you. I can trace energies coming from the orbs and teleport to a limited distance." said Pollux as her whole body glowed in a bright yellow color. Rain was astounded upon seeing this. Pollux was surprised upon completing her reading. There were two orbs that she felt and one of them contains a very high amount of power. Her body stopped glowing as she fell to the ground but fortunately, she was caught by Rain. "The Star King's orb.......I've seen them." and with that, both of them disappeared through a flashy yellow light. They were teleported to another part of the city, specifically the place where Zeo was battling the mysterious person who wields the Espada de Vulcan. Both Rain and Pollux appeared on top of a building.

"Orion!" cried Rain, identifying the mysterious person Zeo was battling. The two were surprised to see the Flame Blader in tatters. Some parts of Zeo's outfit were torn and he even has burn marks on his arms and face. The mysterious person, Orion, struck Zeo with his sword. Due to that attack, Zeo was sent flying towards the city council building. Just like what happened to Rain, Zeo was covered by the debris that were fromed from the destruction of the building. Orion headed towards the young lady with the rosy hair but the Aqua Blader made his move and shot ice seeds to him. "Ice Seed!"

"Ice?" uttered Orion as he guarded himself using his sword. To Rain's surprise, the ice seeds he unleashed turned to nothing but dust. He jumped from the roof of the building where he was in and headed towards Orion. He unleashed his blade and equipped it with Aqua Energy. "I see. So that wheel blade is not just used for mid-range attacks. Heh." as soon as Rain got near him, Orion took hold of his blade. With only his bare fist, he was able to crush the Wheel of the Eight Rain Blades. Rain's blade shattered into pieces. His eyes widened upon seeing this. Just how much power does Orion have?

"Black Blade!!" Zeo cried as an explosion occured from the location where he was in. Orion saw this and smiled. When the dust cleared, they saw the Flame Blader standing and engulfed with a high level flame. Both his body and the Black Blade were engulfed with it. "Black Blade, Version: Fuego Estrella......"

A mysterious power. Could this be hope? To be the flame that envelops all in any circumstance, the Flame Blader's duty......


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Zeo: This power is surging. My body......feels light somehow. I can and I will defeat you, big brother. If only you didn't.......

Orion: Come at me, Zeo. Show me the power of your hatred. Next time on Blader Zeo: The Two Flame Bladers.

Rain: Hope isn't diminished yet, Flame Blader. There's still a way to defeat him!

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Post by Beejay1231 on Fri Jan 08 2010, 21:31

Here are previews of the upcoming story arcs:

Arc 1: Four Winds
Arc 2: Princess Rescue
Arc 3: Star Bladers
Arc 4: Pleiades
Arc 5: Future
Arc 6: Zeos
Arc 7: Time Chain
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Post by Beejay1231 on Sun Jan 17 2010, 22:13

Here's the character design of the rosy-haired lady (her name is yet to be revealed) done by 3Arl`:


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Post by cuteako27 on Thu Jan 21 2010, 23:47

I think that was done by KC not Earl. ahahaa. Wink
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Post by Beejay1231 on Thu Jan 21 2010, 23:48

cuteako27 wrote:I think that was done by KC not Earl. ahahaa. Wink

It was actually done by Earl. Even KC said that. And, there's also a name in the paper. Very Happy

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Post by fate_mikan26 on Thu Jan 21 2010, 23:52

naka NAKS

kuya earl

SO GOOD

DRAW ME ONE TOO

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Smile) i was the one who drew that .. LOL!! :>:> lol!

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Wahahaha, really, eh... its posted here Smile) yeh Earl drew that Smile) and I just did random drawings around it Wink cheers Rock!

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ix3TotallyKei wrote:Wahahaha, really, eh... its posted here Smile) yeh Earl drew that Smile) and I just did random drawings around it Wink cheers Rock!

3Arl` was asking if someone could edit that. I guess you can since you have PS, if you have time that is. Just in case you'll take it up, the color of the hair is rose (light pink) and the eyes are amber gold (something brownish). Very Happy

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